Thursday, May 7, 2009

Mayne's Quick Poem

Here something i was just messing around with roun' 5:30 a.m lemme know how you like it and what you think. I want your opinions what i can work on, what im missing, etc. I want your input.

I'm traveling without moving and can't stop
I'm racing without running nor driving but I can't stop
I'm drowning in a pool of unformed words
I ask why..Why i can't seem to do anything with these words
As they are marinating on my tongue they choose not to form
So I'm stuck traveling without moving nor a destionation
I'm running and driving with no finish line
I have reached a block
I have reached the writers block

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